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Congrats you broke me,
Shoved your hand,
Through my chest,
Ripped it all out,

My beating heart,
In your hands,
You shredded it,
It hurt so much,

The tears flowing,
Never going to stop,
Are you happy?,
Enjoying my pain,

Broke me down,
Watch me cry,
Hope your satisfied,
Cause you've broken me.
Take my hand,
Ill link my fingers to yours,
Hold it tight,
Im not going anywhere,

Loop my arms around your neck,
Slide your arms around my waist,
Im not letting go,
Just enjoying this moment,

Gaze into your eyes,
See the sparkle behind,
kiss you forever more,
Soft and tender,

Ill tell you I love you,
If you tell me first,
Hold me closely,
Kiss me softly
I fell for you,
Like a dove to the sky,
No regrets about it,
Your always in my heart,

My love for you is bulletproof,
No gun could ever wound me,
Unless you are the one to shoot me,
And my love will never shatter,

My dreams of us,
Full of hope and future,
A dream never forgotten,
A dream held close.
All alone in this world,
No one cares,
As I sit here alone,
Sadness ridden through,

Tears slipping out,
The sadness getting deeper,
Eyes turning red and sore,
But no one truly cares,

The nights getting longer,
The nightmares getting worse,
Screams filled with fear,
As the night slowly ticks by.
If I disappeared,
Would you care,
Would you even notice,
Or would I be another faded memory,

If I just up and left,
Didn't  tell you I was going,
Would you ask after me,
Or just move on with your life,

If I went to hospital,
Would you send me a text,
Come visit me if you could,
Or just leave me there to suffer,

If I left this world,
Would you come to my funeral,
And mourn me,
Or would you pretend you didn't me.
I cant believe its another year gone and its remembrance day again. 
Today my heart goes out to all the soldiers who are still fighting, the soldiers lost in all the past wars, and to the families who soldiers who are still fighting, whose soldiers have been lost or who are severally injured or traumatized from the war. 


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becky peters
Artist | Hobbyist | Varied
United Kingdom
hey im becky, im goth and if u dont like it tbh i dont give shit cause its my life im a goth and thats just how i am, i listen to lots of music anyhting from country to screamo. i write mostly poetry and i apologize in advance most of my poems are depressing. i do have a few problems that go in life and with myself so if i go on in my diaries im sorry. hope u enjoy my work :)

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MoonfurADV Featured By Owner 14 hours ago  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you for all of the favs! :D
snow1white1queen1 Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Thanx for the fav ^^
beckypeters Featured By Owner 2 days ago  Hobbyist General Artist
thats ok :) 
becbeccabecky Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2015
Thanks for the watch. I've only just got back into writing/drawing. It's been too long. I have so much inside me. Too much to simply tell friends of.
beckypeters Featured By Owner 2 days ago  Hobbyist General Artist
thats ok :) writing and drawing is sometimes the best way to get all of that out 
ItIsTheSilverMind Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
Thank you for the favorite!
beckypeters Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Thats ok 
TheRealPetron Featured By Owner May 22, 2015  New Deviant Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much for the watch!! :D
beckypeters Featured By Owner May 30, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
thats ok 
LastoftheWolves Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you for the favorites on "Color" and "Then I Met You" I really appreciate it!
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