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A smile,
She uses to cover up,
The pain and guilt,
The things she won't tell no one,

The sparkle,
In her eyes fading,
But no one sees past,
Past the smile that covers it,

Her laugh,
Grows quieter,
As the days,
Grow longer,

Her smile,
Is a cover up,
For everything she feels,
For all the pain she sees.
No one will understand,
What she goes through,
Day in and day out,
As they slowly tick out,

No one will know,
What she sees,
In her day,
Or the scenes she sees,

No one will feel,
The pain she feels,
As she watches it,
Everything fall apart,

No one will know,
What she was thinking,
The day it all happened,
The day her roof caved in.
She's not pretty,
The girl in the mirror,
Too pale,
Too overweight,

Never a beauty reflected,
No confidence,
Fighting a war daily,
Knowing she will never be pretty,

She can't see,
The girl reflecting,
As herself,
She sees a stranger,

Shes sits and wonders,
When will she see,
The true reflection,
Of pain and guilt.
Small red patches,
Sore to the touch,
Slowly getting larger,
Spreading down the back,

Hot water,
Traces down the skin,
Leaving a glowing trail,
Red and wet,

Leaving these little marks,
Water heat keeps rising,
Burns getting worse,
Sorer as the heat rises,

No one notices,
Hidden from sight,
No one will ever see,
But forever there.
The dreams faded,
Everything blurred,
Tears formed,
The smile broke,

The love disappeared,
Heart broke,
It stopped beating,
Pulse no longer there,

Small burns,
No one notices,
Red skin peeling,
Sore patches forming,

A marked grave,
Of a young girl,
A daughter a friend,
A lost soul.
I cant believe its another year gone and its remembrance day again. 
Today my heart goes out to all the soldiers who are still fighting, the soldiers lost in all the past wars, and to the families who soldiers who are still fighting, whose soldiers have been lost or who are severally injured or traumatized from the war. 


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becky peters
Artist | Hobbyist | Varied
United Kingdom
hey im becky, im goth and if u dont like it tbh i dont give shit cause its my life im a goth and thats just how i am, i listen to lots of music anyhting from country to screamo. i write mostly poetry and i apologize in advance most of my poems are depressing. i do have a few problems that go in life and with myself so if i go on in my diaries im sorry. hope u enjoy my work :)

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UnDisclosedDreams Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks for the fav again, hun <3
beckypeters Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
thats ok <3
MoonfurADV Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you for all of the favs! :D
beckypeters Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
thats ok <3
snow1white1queen1 Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Thanx for the fav ^^
beckypeters Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
thats ok :) 
becbeccabecky Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2015
Thanks for the watch. I've only just got back into writing/drawing. It's been too long. I have so much inside me. Too much to simply tell friends of.
beckypeters Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
thats ok :) writing and drawing is sometimes the best way to get all of that out 
ItIsTheSilverMind Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
Thank you for the favorite!
beckypeters Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Thats ok 
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